‘Rag & Muffin’ Progress Update

My next book, Rag & Muffin, is coming along well. I didn’t make the goal (big surprise) I had of finishing it last weekend, mostly because some of the action sequences at the climax are in heavy need of rewriting.

The rooftop chase scene with the cannnibal cyborg only needed light rewriting, and the sword battle with the demon-possessed robot armed with giant chainsaw-scissors was mostly okay, as was the wire-fu knife fight—but the running gun battle with the robot soldiers of the Chinese mafia is a complete mess.

As some of you know, I was working on Rag & Muffin even before I wrote Jake and the Dynamo. The stories bear some similarities in that both are about fourteen-year-old boys tagging along after violent, superpowered girls, but Rag & Muffin is considerably more bloody and brutal, and less funny.

So what took me so dang long to get this ready to publish? There are several reasons including some I don’t divulge to strangers on the internet, but the least private reason is that I needed to develop and polish some writing skills before the book could even be in a condition to publish.

Now that I have one novel out and another off to the publisher and coming out in a few months, finishing Rag & Muffin feels easy. Yes, it needs some work, but finishing it is no longer the insurmountable difficulty it once appeared to be.

Rag & Muffin
Phase:Revising
Due:5 years ago
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‘Jake and the Dynamo: Dead to Rites’ Submitted!

I have just finished the final edits (on my end) of Dead to Rites, the second volume of Jake and the Dynamo.

As usual, the process took me (embarrassingly) longer than I predicted. Although this phase was supposed to be just proofreading for final edits, I ended up deleting a scene, fixing some minor inconsistencies, shuffling a few other scenes around … you know how it goes.

Nonetheless, this book required less extensive reworking than the previous one did, which means I was able to dedicate most of this time to the nitty-gritty points of grammar and style—and that means a better experience for the reader.

If the publishing process is the same as last time, the galley will appear on my desk just once more, asking for my approval after it goes through a final round of someone else’s edits. Then my work on it is done.

I’m jumping from this straight into my next project, which is producing the final, submission-worthy draft of Rag & Muffin. I previously intended to work on my Christmas novel Son of Hel first, but after I realized how much research it will require, I decided to finalize this other novel that’s already written instead.

If things go as planned, I will have two books out this year and two out next year. That’s not exactly pulp speed, admittedly, but it is at least better than average.

Jake and the Dynamo: Dead to Rites
Phase:Proofing
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Roffles Lowell is also working on the illustrations. I couldn’t resist, in the header, showing this detail from one of the pictures he’s sent me (I will have to struggle to resist showing them all before the book is published). This is not the first time he’s drawn Dana Volt in her non-magical form, but I think it’s the first time he’s drawn her as such for a book illustration, and I love it.